Hand In Hand

Hand In Hand

A Poem by Tarry Franck

You caught me
At a difficult time in my life
But I feel blessed
To have you around
To pull me up
From the ground,
You're so special
Not sure if you know
But you lifted my spirit
Gave me a reason to live
You most certainly helped me to grow
Through mind, body and soul,
Give yourself credit where credit is due
I admire you for all you have done
You have opened my heart
And pulled me through,
I can never thank you enough
So I'm writing this to express
What you have done,
But I do know this has come to pass
And from the bottom of my heart
I take a stand
Knowing you're still dear to me
And now I can be true to myself
As we dance through
Hand in hand. 

© 2014 Tarry Franck



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A beautiful and positive poem for love and friendship.
"Knowing you're still dear to me
And now I can be true to myself
As we dance through
Hand in hand. "
I like the above lines. Create good place and vision. Thank you for sharing your poetry. I'm always glad to see your name in the read request.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much Coyote



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Yes this poem speaks to me! If only more people were this appreciative of true friends...

The line "Give yourself credit where credit is due" means that friends should acknowledge the good things that they do for each other. Also, I feel friendship is defined by two people feeling comfortable being their true self around each other.

Posted 3 Months Ago


A beautiful and well written poem. It's a wonderful and positive expression of those rare and unique relationships that we remember forever regardless of whether the person is still present in our lives. Made me think of someone special. Best Wishes, Ben

Posted 3 Months Ago


Hi Tarry Franck!

I like the upbeat feel and the uniformity of your words. The way in which you chose to center the poem is also appealing. Nicely done! Thanks for sharing.

Kind regards,

Schatzi

Posted 1 Year Ago


A lovely poem well written. Well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


The purest times of our lives still hold innocence in pieces like these, and this writer's style always delivers.
Thanks for sharing

Posted 1 Year Ago


Beautiful. The last line just evoked q feeling of immense satisfaction in me. What a way to end a poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Well done

It's amazing how some people touch our lives
and never know.....

Posted 1 Year Ago


I really enjoyed this very beautiful love poem. I can tell it is from the heart.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tender and real, that is how it comes across; Also, real friendship, maybe not love. Nice flow, good structure. Very genuine and authentic, concise yet gentle. I love it.

I'd appreciate it if you could read mine.

Posted 2 Years Ago


That is truly beautiful, you express the very thing I have struggled to communicate to someone I hold dear. The emotion you have created in this poem with such eloquence is wonderful to read.

Posted 2 Years Ago



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