Hotel Bellevue

One time I was staying at a hotel.

I woke up wearing a tight white suit

that tied in the back.

The concierge came in and said,

"There is a fine line between genius and insanity,"

and I said,

"Yea, they get to pick what they wear."

Reviews

[. serah .]

-- hahahahaha... and we always have to wear what we're told to wear... :p

[B]

lol
true
and hilarious ....................

[~]

ohh.. for a moment i thought i read: a fine linen :D

[terry smith]

Oh you are so BAD!!! :D

[~]

lol.. sorry .. wicked morning humor :D

[terry smith]

No need to apologize !! I love your humor!!

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Lol. :)
One question.
Who is 'they'?

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Ha! I just got it!
Duh!

[terry smith]

The geniuses that haven't gone insane :)

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Of course. :)

[Roland Petrov]

Clever! While the poem is genius, the punctuation veers towards the insane. I'd fix it like this: .....said, "There is a fine line between genius and insanity," and I said, "Yea, they....

[terry smith]

Thanks, was in a hurry to put this down before I forgot it...had a lot of ideas running through my head today.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wonderful metaphor...
the strait jacket kind,

there is a little genius and often a lot of insanity in the world of poetry, at least for some of us it feels that way....i relate to this...

nicely done...

"and nurse ratchett, i want to watch the god damn world series game, please!"

[terry smith]

Ha Ha !! Thank you for the review...wrote alot today couldn't turn my mind off..sometimes insanity is divine!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

same way i write...like Frank O'Hara the beat poet...they just come in bunches...i feel more like a conduit than a poet most times.

[terry smith]

Same here!! nice to meet you!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

likewise.............