listen and see

the darkness that surrounds them

a little bit of life deep inside

love, sadness,anger,happyness

what fills them inside

what is it that you see

a different world

where is it they take you

step in my body

see what these eyes are trying to say

LISTEN

closely its all you have

for your eyes will lie to you

SEE

sharply its all you have

for your ears will lie to you

dont fear what you seen

for your ears will tell you

LISTEN

for its all you have

SEE

for its all you have

reach out

these eyes i have

will soon be yours

i see what i fear

i see what i hate

love,sadness,anger,happyness

death that surrounds us

LISTEN, SEE

because i can only say this once

a memory may fade for a while

a love may disapear for a while

a sound may go for a while

but close your eyes open your heart

you will see

just what you need

to find me so

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice flow of words and emotions in the poem.
"i see what i fear
i see what i hate
love,sadness,anger,happyness
death that surrounds us "
I like the ending to the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Minnie]

If things could be perfect and it was my place to judge, I would say this is!

[~Dragon X]

I am stealing Ami's comment. "Nicely written"! :D I am familiar with your writings, and the kind of stuff you did in this one is a bit different. Nice style to it--great job! (Though I do see a few misspellings. X3)

[Priscilla Moore]

If everyone could. Well done.

[Ami N.]

Nicely written [as always]. I agree with Ashley that the title should be "Listen and See"
Great piece :)

[Kim]

how about something like {Mixed Emotions} or {Trying to tell you something}
I enjoyed this, one little thing if you don't mind me saying Happyness is happiness. Awesome write.

[joshua deathdealer]

I like this. Nice work.

[Ashley Rivers :)]

It is great! I think the title could be "Listen and See"