remember me

i named it after the song i listen to why i write makes me clear my head

i remember things

things im not supposed to know

memories that were long forgotten

i remember things

that were once buried deep

i remember things

i remember

the cries

of a worried mother

i remember

the silent sounds

i remember

the doctors voice as he says its a girl

i remember

my limp breathing

i remember

the pain in your eyes

i remember

the tears in your eyes

i remember

the sadness in your voice

i remember

i remember

the smell of the room i was in

i remember

those nights you when i was all alone

i remember

you telling me to hold on

i remember

those as a baby

i remember

meeting someone dear to your heart

i dont know his name

i remember

the long ride home

i remember

the look in your eyes

the look of pain

you wasnt sure i was here to stay

 you didnt believe the doctors

you was scared

just like i was

i remember

you cheaking on me

you thought id slip away

i remember who i saw now

he was a boy

he said you knew him well

he was your son

i remember

growing up

every little thing i did

made you nervous

you was afriad id leave you

i remember

because i lived them

i remember

being a baby

i remember being born

i remember that look in your eyes

i remember the blood

i remember the look

that look

when i didnt make a sound

you use it alot

i remember do you

Reviews

[sivan]

such a beautiful piece and heart wrenching. tears at my broken heart

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts in the poem. Memories are permanent. Good and bad can sneak up on us. I like the thoughts and the strong ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[joshua deathdealer]

Sometimes the past can be so overbearing yet the memories can be peaceful. I enjoyed this great flowing poem.