Nowhere to be found...

shes surrounded by the piercing eyes of so many souls.

yet hers feels alone.
...isolated...
in a place unknown.
craving to get out.
reaching for something nowhere to be found.
bundle her up and take her away.
as she cries trying to get through another day.
...without you...
she strives to be seen.
do you honestly see her?
do you honestly know her?
do you honestly love her?
...like you say you do...
she sits day in and day out.
waiting for you to come around.
she takes a deep breath in as she whispers to the wind.
where are you?
i am here, yet you are nowhere to be found.

Reviews

[Jenn]

shes surrounded by the piercing eyes of so many souls.

yet hers feels alone.
...isolated...
in a place unknown.
craving to get out.
reaching for something nowhere to be found .

The poem is not to long or to short . I think it gets to the point . Hope all goes well . Happy writting
Well written. Touches my soul.

[NataliaXael]

I can definitely relate to this, those first two lines are totally me.

[I Am Svetlana]

Such a touching piece and sure many can relate to. It's not easy going through each day feeling as if we're invisible to everyone and even to that certain person we wish could see us. The person we trusted with everything, every bit of our inner lives. We crave for people to see us when the darkness hits...as we journey through...as it pulls us down...we just pray that any minute, anyone could look over and save us instead of just averting their eyes in the opposite direction.

[Taylor Munnerlyn]

This one is about my dad leaving and me growing up with him around but he never spent time with me or showed me he cared and loved me..and he would tell me he is a good father when he doesn't even know a thing about me and nvr really listens.

[Dr. Wood ?]

very sad, and an all too common feeling for the young....Life gets better, believe me

[Taylor Munnerlyn]

Its about my dad.

[Dr. Wood ?]

then it is all the more poignant

[Taylor Munnerlyn]

Well thank you. I just wrote one tonight..my first in a year or so..i would like for you to tell me what you think. Its my newest one up on my page

[Dr. Wood ?]

I'll take a peek........