Burning Sensation

this is the first poem that i have written as a member here and i hope that it works and comes out to be one of my best!

Have you ever had this burning sensation

don't know where it comes from

it starts and goes for hours and hours

it might not stop ever

 

Have you gotten this burning sensation

in your toes and your fingers or anywhere else

it's like a spark between us

not anything new, just intensified

 

Have you gotten this sensation?

it can heal you from your problems

make you and me relaxed

and even make  you sick.

 

 This is the sensation that you and me share

every night when you come to visit

it's the comfort and the warmth

and it's the love that is shared between us

 

it's like no one in the world could ruin the moment

no one, no one at all, just you and me together in our own world

you can tell me this or you can keep to yourself

but which ever you do make sure i'm included

 

i absolutely love the way we feel

when we're home alone together

or on opposite sides of the world

all that matters is that we are together some how

 

we look up at the stars in the night

and we see each others faces

whether it is real or just imagination

it is strong enough to keep us together

 

strong people is what this world needs

just what it needs

together or apart we're together until the end

like what happens in kindergarten

 

someone might ask to be your friend

and the next moment you're sharing your secrets

not even worrying whether or not the other will tell

and some don't even last for the rest of school

 

just enough to get comfortable

not even enough to feel not alone in this huge world

not meaning to hurt one another but doing it anyway

it's like sticking a dagger in your heart forever

 

so do you feel that burning sensation

it's the one that keeps us together

but yet it's the feeling that keeps us apart

it might also be the reason why we met

Author's Note

i don't really go for the capitalized letters so ignor them please! it is my personal way of my signature!

Reviews

[Frank F. Atanacio]

Very well formualted and well done for a first poem. It carried well in a stream of words, and did hit its target dead on. I have to admit I was trying to read it like someone had actually just took a pen to a paper and started to scribble, but half way through It felt like a good poem.. thought out nicely..:) God Job my friend.