So... What Happened...

this has been stirring in my mind for a while

you always used to say

"you're so perfect for me"

"you always make me smile"

it was great for me and for you

 

it was great for me

you say my friends are my world

i say you make me complete

that was great for you

 

i say i love you

you say i love you more

and then it goes on and on

a circle great for me

 

but then we lost touch

talking stopped

not communicating

not breathing the same beat

 

not matching anything

left completely alone

that was bad for you

and bad for me

 

when we started talking again

like old friends do to catch up

we talked about everything

and nothing was great for anyone

 

we left our feelings out of the picture

we left our emotions under our feet

we never talked of them again

we left them out in the rain

 

when we first brought them back

it was amazing

i said i wasn't feeling important

and you said i was so important to you

 

i said i did not see that in you

you said you were sorry

and then when you came

came for dinner

 

i suddenly saw it again

it was great for me and you

we were happy

once again

 

not saying anything

anything to upset me

not mentioning before

starting a new canvas

 

loving each other like never before

not letting anything stop us

not leaving each other

being together -- forever

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[Meredith Leigh]

I thought it was great! You told a nice flowing, detailed story. I learned a lot from just a short passage. Great write!

- Kriss