The Heart

A Poem by Jaco Louw ((Teenage_Poet_Loser))

Gore...

Pulsating movement
Spastic behaviour
Blood
Blood
So much blood
spewing out of it
lub dub, lub dub
It's the sound of your
heart it's pumping
in my hands
With a smile on my face
I give it back to you
You gasp
for air to fill your
thirst for air
But your heart
yeah your heart
is beating outside your chest...

© 2011 Jaco Louw ((Teenage_Poet_Loser))

Author's Note

I know this is not everyones cup of tea... but is it good or bad?? does it make anay sense at all...

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Jaco Louw ((Teenage_Poe..

yay =D

Posted 1 Year Ago

LilMissWriter17

Really good! :D

Posted 1 Year Ago

hmm	simply amazing Posted 1 Year Ago simply amazing Rating /100

Luna Starshine

Loooooove iiiiiiiit

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Added on October 2, 2011
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Jaco Louw ((Teenage_Poet_Loser))

South Africa

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Love Stephen King! I am 17 years old. I started writing a couple of months ago, so dont be too harsh, but please I need ALL the tips I can get. I really want to best selling author. Busy with my first.. more..