Love Letter Savior

Love Letter Savior

A Poem by Blake
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Lyrics to a song I wrote! Note:I realize it does not rhyme much. Please do not tell me it sucks because it does not rhyme. Songs don't have to rhyme.

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Commercial lies selling depression
Promised by a lullaby of broken wings
Living fades like the sparks from smoke
I've been composing for a empty premiere
Melodies for the disorder of desire fear
Look what you have done

I'm searching for love letter saviors
Nothing's safer than treading as a sailor
Underneath the water, I'm just a poetry failure
Swimming for miles and miles and
I'm drenched in civil wars

You speak like a storm of cigar film
Empty and light with every sin wrapped in gin
Rewind to the first time that I felt you 
Running down like a passion
Reaching into light, I'll be living on the moon
Look what you have done

I'm searching for love letter saviors
Nothing's safer than treading as a sailor
Underneath the water, I'm just a poetry failure
Swimming for miles and miles and
I'm drenched in civil wars

Siren's melody runs through empty hallways
It  wakes you up to the waves crashing into the sea
Just the waves crashing into me
As you watch me sail on a sinking ship
(You never saw it coming,)
Please, I can't save myself 

I'm searching for love letter saviors
Nothing's safer than treading as a sailor
Underneath the water, I'm just a poetry failure
Swimming for miles and miles and
I'm drenched in civil wars

Siren's melody runs through empty hallways
It wakes you up to the waves crashing into the sea
Just the waves crashing into me

© 2012 Blake



Author's Note

Blake
The fourth line should be "melodies for the disorder of desire (or fear)"

Also, please tell me what you think! Critique it please!! (:

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Added on April 7, 2012
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Blake
Blake

Imperial, PA



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I am almost 15 years old. I am a guy. I have been writing since I was 6. more..