Chapter 1A Chapter by Tess
I rounded the corner of main street hoping that with my blade of wood wtih the screw cap end that held my hidden dagger i would find him , the b*****d that killed my mother and brother , as i always wish to look him in the eyes as i plunge my blade into his heart, but i had no such luck . What i found instead had supprized me completely , there she was a girl no more than sixteen running down the abbandoned road in steletos with a mini skirt of pure black and pink feathers at the lowest seam and all she had for a top was a plain clean black belly shirt . She was screaming . Directly behind her walking , no stalking , a leech with jet black hair ice white skin and the fullest lips i'd ever seen - but i knew what lay beneith fangs sarper than the tip of the sharpest blade. I sprung into action , taking the fighting stace - right knee to the ground , left leg extended , right hand in front offering balance , my wickedly curved blade in my left hand. I did not have the chance to defend myself thought because in a milisecond he was behind me my arms gathered in his right hand alone. At that moment i knew i was going to die.
" You inturupted my feeding ,huntress, i should kill you now but perhaps I should just feed on you instead. " Said the vampire holding me back and with that he bent his neck towards mine i could feel his breath on my throat , " right there" he whisperd using to fingers from his left hand to point out where he was going to sink his fangs into my flesh , the feel of his lips before the fangs were oddly comforting and it only stung for a milisecond as it does when getting a shot . When he began to drink the colors i saw in my minds eye were amazing briliant shades of every color to perfect to describe . I could hear his voice in my mind Relax Jazlyn he said and panic rushed through me as he spoke my name , but i relaxed i felt as if i had no choice I won't hurt you , please just trust me and i didn't understand why must i trust him if he is only using me as a meal. I trust in many but no leech is worthy unless they are newly made have not killed and are searching for some sort of wood to plunge into their heart ! i screamed with my mind and soon wished i had'nt because then without breaking the seal from my neck he sliced his wrist and opened my mouth. Then he pulled away , myself still dazed from the blood loss i drifted back to my body too slowly , before i knew it my mouth was full of a sweet liquid taped shut and i was being blinked somewhere where i was shackled into wooden stocks with only one thought to me and only one thought from him either way i'm dead , either i choke on his blood or i become one of them .
" Have fun choosing ,Jazlyn " the Vampire said removing the tape from my mouth and imediatly i spit it out but it was all to late i was already blood-bonded to him . and once your blood bonded to a vampire if he dies you die therefor i could'nt kill him .
" Hey!" i snaped after him " whats your name ?" he stoped suddenly .
" you can call me Aubrey , Aubrey Quinn "
s**t , now you've done it Jaz you got yourself blood-bonded to the only son of Rashel Jordon and Jhon Quinn . Rashel was a vampire hunter until her husband ,Jhon, was kidnpped and he finally got back to her and changed her because he was nearly starved to death while held prisoner , he drained her of blood then gave her his own to save her life .Aubrey was the fith most powerful vampire in the world , and he could do with her whatever he pleased , he could change her ,he could feed on her , and he could keep her prisoner, he could even track her down if she escaped , he could do everything to her ,except kill her .
I sat and contemplated on what to review over this enticing peice finnally settling on: So far , so good . Though a little predictable in the way you started , it defenitly became more confusing , wich can be either disasterous to a novela or quite pertent . We'll just have to read on to see if this story will burn out or if it will thrive on the little oxygen you've given this flame of a story to survive , my advise to you : dont bring in the life support just yet .
Quite satisfied with my review i turned my computer off and looked out my window to see if he was still there. Not supprised at all by what i saw , after all he'd been stalking me for over a month. I had already called the police , but since he had'nt taken any moves of violence towards me it was'nt a prioity case . what a screwd up world we lived in. so i went to go get my Pajamas and on the way to the dresser i stopped at the window looked the creep straight in the eye and flipped him off. He scared me , he Reminded me to much of the character aubrey in the story i all to recently read , he reminded me of him in al the impossible ways , i blinked and he was gone . Good , now maybe i can sleep without being watched. I thought to myself.
Then the unthinkable happend ,my stalker, the one who seemed so non-violent , crashed in through my window . Naturally i started screaming, and he started to wrestle me to the ground . When he finally won he put his hand over my mouth but long before had the screaming stopped , i bit down on his hand. Hard.
"Ow! God damnit why do you people always bite me?! " My attacked yelled in outrage more than pain. I started screaming again. No . Shhh.... You don't want to scream anymore . In fact all this screaming is making you sleepy , you want to sleep .you trust me .You know your safe with me . He said this , but his lips didn't move . Almost roboticly i fell to sleep , the last thing i rember was him lifting me and placing me in the passenger side seat of a car and belting me in , followed by a series of clicks that could only be handcuffs . He thinks of everything there's no chance of me escaping . I thought to myself as i drifted off to sleep.
© 2013 Tess
Added on July 25, 2012
Last Updated on January 25, 2013
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AboutI'm an outcast in middle school , i love to write but i keep myself out of honors class on purpose. I dont want the attention on me just yet but i'm aspiring to become a published author . If i get pu.. more..