Corrispodince to Zara's MOTD

Rays' P.O.V

  Okay so , Tess may say i'm a Cathloic school boy ,and the truth is ... I am, the only reason i go to that school is because my last school shut down . According to Tess" I'm a wimpy ,pain in the a*s " but i'm not a wimp . i'm just afraid of dying .unlike Tess who's seen so many dead bodies she won't even blink an eye . The reason i wanted to run with Tess is simple she knew a secret way out and i had to get home to my family ,to find out if they were still alive . I knew she would'nt tollarate me for long ,but i hoped she could tollarate me long enough so i could ditch her and get myself home . I knew if i pissed her off she would grab the nearest thing and chop my head off . She may have dreams of killing me, but i had dreams of living and getting home safely . then she starts to scream at me .

" Do you see what is going on ? My goal is to get out alive! and i don't need some s****y guy like you tagging along!" She yelled and i recoiled with shock on my face.Then she stormed out but i followed "Tess! Please!" i yelled after her knowing it would'nt do any good .The workshop door started to shake, and i was attacked from behind .

 

Reviews

[CrimsonBlaze]

I have to say, you've captured a character quite nicely and whatnot. I will probably try to squeeze this little thing in as a bonus and let's see how other's reception goes. Even though it was short, it didn't matter. That tidbit about Richard in MOTD was small, and you have brought a little background to him..
I'll be sure to repost this (not as mine but obviously yours) when I finish a couple more chapters. I just started typing and I haven't wrote in like, weeks!