The everlasting dance

The everlasting dance

A Poem by Tess

1,2,3 . 1,2,3

 "Dance with me " said death to life

" I'm not sure if i should ." said life to death

" Oh , please do it will be a thrilling ride ." Death replyed

"Very well ." Life said taking his hand

Death steped on her toes

as life wrinkeld her nose in pain

"please be careful " life said " For i am very fragile "

 

little did they know they started a dance that would never end

 

" Dear girl , i'm very sorry . I'll try not to let it happen again." Death said to Life

the photographer walked up to the Dancers and said

 "you two look very good together, you seem to balnce one another"

"thank you " the duo replyed

As the photographer left life stumbled and stepped on Deaths foot with the back of her heel

" oh dear , Are you alright?"

 

Little did they know their dance would never end

you and I have wished it would but it never will , it can't

as the two trip over one another someone is born when death is hurt

and someone dies when life is harmed

 

the one armed with looks

the other with wits

nither one of them ever quits

they can't


© 2012 Tess



My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

._. Oh glub, this is an amazing poem and a nice spin and point of view on how life and death came to be. I APPROVE!
But I wonder what would happen if they called it quits .... wauit am I that stupid? -.-'
This was amazing though because it grips the reader and keeps them till it ends and leaves them wondering..
Above all I love this interpretation 0_0

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



Reviews

._. Oh glub, this is an amazing poem and a nice spin and point of view on how life and death came to be. I APPROVE!
But I wonder what would happen if they called it quits .... wauit am I that stupid? -.-'
This was amazing though because it grips the reader and keeps them till it ends and leaves them wondering..
Above all I love this interpretation 0_0

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Request Read Request
Subscribe Subscribe
Add to Library My Library

Stats

88 Views
1 Review
Rating
Added on June 18, 2012
Last Updated on June 18, 2012

Author

Tess
Tess

NJ



About
I'm an outcast in middle school , i love to write but i keep myself out of honors class on purpose. I dont want the attention on me just yet but i'm aspiring to become a published author . If i get pu.. more..

Writing
Chapter 1 Chapter 1

A Chapter by Tess


chapter 2 chapter 2

A Chapter by Tess