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where rivers talk


A Poem by Trée
"
the memory of a lover
"

I do
remember

the bloom
of a smile

the lilt
of a voice

the look
of healing

where rivers
talk

and birds
walk

as grass
grows

and dreams
sow

 
 


© 2009 Trée



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This is so simple, reminds me of Blake. Sometimes the most simple poems are the most effective, and this is one. It's evocative. However; being a fiend regarding rhyme and metre, I'm disappointed that the last line didn't pull it into shape. My immediate response was to mutter -
'with dreams
stealing.'
Just my take on it.

Posted 3 Days Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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