WHAT AM I?: Nephilim WHAT AM I?: Nephilim
A teen boy gets killed, but trades his soul for another chance. He changes. A girl notices the new boy with silver eyes.


A Story by KCthelastboyscout

A short, short story

"OH NO...THIS CANT BE HAPPENING.NOT NOW.NOT NOW...NOOO.WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME?...I NEED YOU...PLEASE.I CANT DO THIS WITHOUT YOU.JUST...NOOO ...OK...OK...LETS BREATHE...ONE TIME.I JUST NEED YOU ONE TIME...PLEASE...the key in the ignition turns.the engine of the car stutters then wails and finally...silence...YOU GOT TO BE KIDDING...WHY ME?

© 2017 KCthelastboyscout

Author's Note

It's funny now when you can write about it

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I love this piece! I wasn’t sure where it was going at first...this has happened to the best of us! Relatable, funny, truth, and full of emotion! Well done!!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago

lol Oh my, the dreaded please start story. And with today's cars rolling them off really isn't an option :)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago

It took me a few reads to get this and then I understood. Very good. I like it when you are led down a path and then you realise you've been 'had'.
Well done for such a tastly little gem!.

Posted 1 Month Ago

Oh man I've felt that panic in the dead of winter after I left my lights on all night. You conveyed the panic perfectly.

Posted 1 Month Ago

Been there, done that. Great short story! Gave me a smile.

Posted 1 Month Ago

So creative! I love the style and the surprise, keep writing and sharing with us!

Posted 1 Month Ago

Hahaha! This was so dramatic, I thought someone was dying! Well played!

Posted 1 Month Ago

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7 Reviews
Added on September 4, 2017
Last Updated on September 4, 2017

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