A Poem by KCthelastboyscout

Quality time with someone special

The water is warm.You have your legs wrapped around me.You massage my chest with your hands.Slowly and tenderly you kiss my neck.This is the closest to heaven here on earth.Paradise in your arms...

© 2017 KCthelastboyscout

Author's Note

There are few intimate moments like sharing a tub of water with that certain someone

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A truth we all come to see in time

Posted 10 Months Ago

Mmmm, a very nice poem allowing one to feel the warm water and the shared intimacy within your words. Well done Sir. Angel

Posted 10 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is a shame that those moments of intimacy are so rare. BUT - I'm know that when they happen they are all the more memorable. Thanks for the very pleasant reminder.

Take care - Dave

Posted 10 Months Ago

I totally agree that sharing a bath or shower with someone special is a very sweet kind of intimacy. Thanks for sharing your words with us KC ... and I hope that you had an enjoyable Thanksgiving.

~ hsg

Posted 10 Months Ago

as real as it may have been ...the note killed it
but sounds like a good holiday aftermath to me

Posted 10 Months Ago

your note sort of took some of the splendor and passion away with reality like this very much

Posted 10 Months Ago

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I worked with a fella years ago who borrowed his brothers false teeth to attend a wedding as he had lost his being ill the previous night.

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Added on November 26, 2017
Last Updated on November 27, 2017

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