AWAKEN MY LOVE

a love story

I am here
Hear me
Open your eyes
Arise beloved...

Welcome to your new world
Take comfort in my arms
I will show you so much more in this life
You are now forever and everlasting
Let me show you the way...

We are nocturnal animals
Our prey is the living
We shall feed off their fear
Their blood will provide sustenance to our hunger
You and I will decide their fates at our choosing
We will remain hidden in darkness and we will be merciless...

Look into my eyes
You have been reborn into immortality
What was the end, is now the beginning
Our love is beyond death...

Author's Note

Just getting lost in my imagination

Reviews

[Christy the Poetic Hear..]

Very deep and nicely penned!! Good job!

[light and ashes]

This is a good and well written poem and had every bit of the sexiness that we tend to associate with vampires.

[Dave]

K.C. Very interesting that I don't believe I've ever seen this side of you before,
I like it, very much.

Take care - Dave

[Relic]

This is constructed so well and is easy to read. There are many interpretations that jump out upon reading. Whether gothic or otherworldly, I like it a lot.

[Bacchus]

Creepy but interesting...
Reminds me of the lost boys an old vampire movie

[NataliaXael]

*envisions riding off into the sunset*

[LKBillips]

Love a good Vampire romance! I hope they don't break up because forever is a long time to deal with an undead ex. lol

[Moonie]

Ha, this one has a big Dracula-ish vibe to it! Wonder if it was indeed the book that inspired you...

[sette]

hopefully it can be real this time around

[April Blue]

This poem is truly amazing, you have a great imagination.. I love the description of love in this poem..