Don't sit on your a*s all day!

Don't sit on your a*s all day!

A Poem by that weird guy



  We scream and yell
  at air.

  We run from the
  invisible monsters.

  People say we are rude,
  people say we are idiots.

  People call us retards,
  people say we don't understand
  life.

  But we do understand life.

  We have to do something in
  life.

  We have to break rules.

  We have to yell and scream
  and cry and die.

  And the next day,
  we have to do it
  all over again. 

© 2011 that weird guy



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There's days I'd totally like to do this but so far I haven't. Gotta try it though:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


The modern equivalent of carpe diem :)
But you've managed to bring your own vitality and rawness to the term.
I enjoyed this, well done

Posted 2 Years Ago


I like this strong poem. I agree with your words. Can't wait for things to happen. Need to be active and alive. Too many dead bodies wandering around already. A very good ending to a excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Great final strophe it brings to the poem a wonderful conclusion

Posted 2 Years Ago


love it

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very good:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Love it... I love all of your writing :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


I love the obvious optimize that you put across through your works...
really great work.!
:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


sounds like me:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


This a great poem. I thought you did an excellent job. Go Danny. Haha. Thanks for sharing. :D

Posted 2 Years Ago



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hello. my name is danny. im a weird person. so i write weird poems. and i am bipolar. and that is all you need to know about me. if you really want to ask something, then send me a message. just keep .. more..

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