Grin

This is a poem that I wrote during a dark time.

 Grin

 

So much pain just under my skin
Everyone is fooled once again
People don't think you can be born bad
So that makes me a sum of my mom and dad
Spent to much time hating this place
Lies surround me hitting my face
But this face I wear people don't see
I hide it from everyone including me
Ending it all is not the answer
But when the time comes I'll say “yes sir”
Things are not always as they seem
All I want to do is scream
Let me out from my skin
Don't hold my evil in

 

 

© Jordan Mandic 2009

Author's Note

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Reviews

[fallendemonofmercy]

Things are not always as they seem
All I want to do is scream
Let me out from my skin
Don't hold my evil in

i love this last line...sometimes it's soooooooo easy to manipulate people, it's disgusting. you don't even have to try. the idea comes, and sparks your first move and then you reel them in. then you can twist them and unleash your evil on them but only your feeling intensifies

[The High Poet]

I am sorry to all that need proper dictionary English to enjoy poetry. I write from the hear and what comes out, is what I write down. So if you don't like the way I right please don't read!

[v.a. stein]

loose use of the word "is" its the weakest link to words in the english language.
expand futher on dictoral retations between words. this will help a lot better