Just Us

Just Us

A Poem by duff



Guided by the powers of a flower in your hair

I’m the guy being impolite staring at your chair

Such beauty has me capsizing and analyzing

Is this truth to be or just me calmly fantasizing

I’m stung like I had my bell rung by Ali’s tongue

I’m hung by your smile and my heart had to run

I love you hon and I promise to punch the agent

Cuffed tricks now frisked by a lovers payment

© 2017 duff

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Aloha duff, a dangerous liaison :) some people have that thing about them that drives us a little crazy just for the chance to get next to them (her). Breaking the law ...that's commitment or crazy :) Izzy

Posted 5 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


5 Months Ago

Haha, thanks Izzy! It's amazing what some will do for that chance.
Island Hippy

5 Months Ago

It's all aloha my friend!
I'm puzzled by some of the lines here but I get the feeling quite well. I know firsthand what it's like to be mesmerized by a beautiful woman. Somewhere inside a voice is saying...how can get to know her?

Good writing Duff.

Posted 5 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


5 Months Ago

Hey Relic. Much appreciated. That's exactly it. He's crazy about her and willing to even break the .. read more

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Added on April 29, 2017
Last Updated on May 7, 2017



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