Mama's Boy

Mama's Boy

A Poem by duff
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Their smile is a mask Adam

Please put down your knife

Why don’t we have a dance

Now that’s a bit better isn't it

And one and two and three

Tomorrow I have someone

A perfect trophy for my baby

Beautiful with supple breasts

I also bought better restraints

Brand new soundproof walls

Nothing but the best for you

There won’t be any runners

It’s time to get ready for bed

You have a big day tomorrow



© 2017 duff



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Oh oh!! Monsters in the House! Deep, dark, - no "restraints"-Ha! This is, by far, no sane mother's lullaby to a tired son! Love the deceptively sweet and soothing conversational tone with the zingers casually, dramatically dropped in..."There won't be any runners"... Love it!!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

4 Months Ago

Haha! Thank you Annette. I'm glad you like this devilish piece:)



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This is so freaky!! I love it though! Wonderfully written.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

3 Months Ago

Thank you Tamika! I'm happy you liked it:)
This is like an episode of criminal minds in poetry form. Someone get me Agent Reid! This one gave me the chills.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

3 Months Ago

Haha, I like that! That show can be addicting.
Thank you for putting a smile on my face. .. read more
Oh oh!! Monsters in the House! Deep, dark, - no "restraints"-Ha! This is, by far, no sane mother's lullaby to a tired son! Love the deceptively sweet and soothing conversational tone with the zingers casually, dramatically dropped in..."There won't be any runners"... Love it!!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

4 Months Ago

Haha! Thank you Annette. I'm glad you like this devilish piece:)
Very blunt and direct. To the point. And definitely on the dark side of things, I believe there is a series on tv, forgotten the name that is about a young man living with his mom: Ah, I believe its called Bates Hotel. This totally reminds me of that show.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

4 Months Ago

I know that show and it's damn creepy so that's a big compliment! Thank you Maria. The old classic.. read more
Maria

4 Months Ago

True, indeed, you have a point there. Thank you for that enlightenment, and your welcome.
Woah nicely done.
Your work is so deep and emotional i almost feel i can picture each word in my head.
Great job

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

4 Months Ago

Thank you Pia. I appreciate that. It usually is brief so I try to convey what I want without leavi.. read more
pia

4 Months Ago

Oh i never care about length
As long as your message is conveyed. And a point has been made .. read more
duff

4 Months Ago

I couldn't agree more.
Thanks for sending this one as well, my man... Your stuff just keeps getting more complex and superb as I read it... This exceeded your normal avenue of sinister succinct wordage, and traversed into something a bit more defined and refined... Scarily penned...

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

4 Months Ago

Thanks man. I don't know where this one came from but I'm glad you liked it. Lately writing is a bit.. read more
Silente

4 Months Ago

Can never argue with the darker side of life... Hah
duff

4 Months Ago

True statement. Things always seem to get a bit more interesting, lol
Sinister and haunting in the most macabre genre of writing. Again such powerful impact with excellent images conveyed.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

4 Months Ago

Thank you John! I appreciate your time my man
Haunting and chilling poetry, yet there is an addictive quality to your writing that leaves me wanting more. Keep it up!

Reasons for using the name Adam? Just curious..

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

5 Months Ago

Right on my friend. I'm glad you liked it! Thank you so much. No reason in particular for the nam.. read more
Now this is as dark as dark. All the normal adjectives fail to pass muster. I would suggest disturbing but that would not suggest good also.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

5 Months Ago

I was hoping for that, lol. Thank you Ken. Always a pleasure to hear your thoughts.
Oh, my.
Well now...this suggests quite a bit.
Ahem...

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

duff

5 Months Ago

Ya, I kinda found a dark little corner for this one, lol.
Thank you for reading it.

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