Core

Core

A Poem by duff
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Features like creatures

You will never be mine

Bite your dreams child

Pay no mind to poison

Story not your reading

No one shall love thee

 

 



© 2017 duff



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Loved it. Haunting and affecting words delivered in your usual rhythmic, beating style. I love how you consistently squeeze such a powerful message into short works.

"No one shall love thee" - We so often let ourselves believe that we have no self-worth, usually this leads to us denigrating others as well. Sadly the world is often one sad cycle of intolerance and disparagement. Thank you for sharing

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

4 Months Ago

Thank you my friend. If I had an attention span to write longer stuff I would, lol. You make a gre.. read more



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Dude, that is like definitely a scary thing to read before bedtime...man, truly intense,...and I am over here shivering,,but not from cold....phewy,,,

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maria

4 Months Ago

Ok, that is much better, but yeah Creepy, was totally there, and so real...shivers...but hey great w.. read more
duff

4 Months Ago

Well thank you and I'm pleased you liked it
Maria

4 Months Ago

Sure thing will have nightmares but alas
Aaaaah! A fantastic witches' brew of a poem! Great wordage and spooky imagery evoked..."Pay no mind to poison" we imagine the hag croaking, her crooked green fingers stirring cauldrons of "features like creatures"...And extolling "No one shall love thee"...How dare she?! We love thee sir duff!! Excellent.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

4 Months Ago

Thank you Annette! Your kindness has me grinning huge right now. I truly appreciate it:)
This has a fairytale quality to it shades of Sleeping Beauty (poisoned apple), Beauty and the Beast (features like creatures) and Cinderella (No one shall love thee-although it also has Shakespearean qualities to it. A woman no doubt who has wronged the protagonist?

Posted 4 Months Ago


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duff

4 Months Ago

It's an inspiration from all of those. Just my extremely brief take on it. Man, i look forward to .. read more

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