Mixed Tape

Mixed Tape

A Poem by duff
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Allow me to slip like your fiend

Can I touch you like morphine

I’m perfect so I dance beautiful

Cigarettes told me I’m that fool

I”m a sun when you’re in class

Let’s have breakfast and chat

Coffee and your eyes have me

I need you tonight so just stay

Let’s speak easy in gentle sigh

A sip of trouble has me in light

Rewind to play that again yes

Love a scene that will test us





© 2017 duff



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You amaze me with the growth... Every time... I stand by the fact... You can single-handedly say more in 3-4 word lines... Than any writer I have had the pleasure of reading can say in 10 word lines... Take that as you will, but I think it is absolutely jaw-droppingly talented... Kudo's, friend

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duff

3 Days Ago

What up my brother! I hope you are well and it's great to hear from you. Your review is too kind b.. read more
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This really does feel like a mixed tape, the way it goes from dancing & cigarettes (presumably night activities) to sunshine breakfast chats & then back to needing one another at night. Interesting way to use recognizable details of one's day & night as markers to conjure up that old melody of longing again . . .

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Wow, I must apologize, as I did not see this any sooner, but am lost in words, the meaning is very deep, and intriguing, as well as very catching. I loved how you weaved in and out, taking the reader through a ride, of mixed emotions, hence your title Mixed Tape. As always a great piece, and I have no doubt, that you will continue providing us with excellent writing, in the near future.
Well written, and well done. I am amazed and so in love with this piece. Keep it up. :)

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

3 Days Ago

Thank you Maria! I'm still not writing much so I really appreciate your time. Very happy that you .. read more
Maria

3 Days Ago

Sure thing, and its ok, take your time. Enjoy your down time, and once you are in that place, that o.. read more
You amaze me with the growth... Every time... I stand by the fact... You can single-handedly say more in 3-4 word lines... Than any writer I have had the pleasure of reading can say in 10 word lines... Take that as you will, but I think it is absolutely jaw-droppingly talented... Kudo's, friend

Posted 1 Week Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

duff

3 Days Ago

What up my brother! I hope you are well and it's great to hear from you. Your review is too kind b.. read more
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This brought back memories of tape reels of the sixties and seventies. Of recording music from the radio and finding love in youth. Certainly one with many triggers in it duff. Might suggest the final line as 'Love has our scene that we must test'?

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John Alexander McFadyen

1 Week Ago

Hi duff I am fine. Planning our next holiday to Mull then on to Mauritius.I had meant to say 'Love .. read more
duff

1 Week Ago

I'm excited for your upcoming journey! I'm sure you will have lots to share. I just moved to the m.. read more
John Alexander McFadyen

1 Week Ago

The mountains sound great. Glad you are happy there and hope it keeps on giving you thrills.

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Added on August 3, 2017
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