Mixed Tape

Mixed Tape

A Poem by duff
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Allow me to slip like your fiend

Can I touch you like morphine

I’m perfect so I dance beautiful

I”m a sun when you’re the lash

Let’s have breakfast and watch

The coffee in people's eyes boil

I need you tonight so just remain

A sip of trouble has me on blast

Press rewind to see that again

I love a scene that will test us





© 2017 duff



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You amaze me with the growth... Every time... I stand by the fact... You can single-handedly say more in 3-4 word lines... Than any writer I have had the pleasure of reading can say in 10 word lines... Take that as you will, but I think it is absolutely jaw-droppingly talented... Kudo's, friend

Posted 2 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

duff

2 Months Ago

What up my brother! I hope you are well and it's great to hear from you. Your review is too kind b.. read more
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This is CRAZY good. LOVE IT. Kinda sounds cathartic in essence...which I LOVE. Passion.
Thanks for sharing!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

1 Month Ago

Thank you A! You made me smile.
this was great
the title for some reason reminded me of that joke where one goes ' your mixtape is on fire'
well umm your poetry is on fire
this was beyond amazing
loved the use of grasping words and poetic analogies

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

1 Month Ago

Thank you Pia! Your review rocks and it's a pleasure to hear your insight! I appreciate your persp.. read more
pia

1 Month Ago

hahaah thanks !!!
Nice lyrics very magical. Beautiful picture in my head. Big thanks to your creation.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

1 Month Ago

Thank you for your kind review! I truly appreciate that.
This really does feel like a mixed tape, the way it goes from dancing & cigarettes (presumably night activities) to sunshine breakfast chats & then back to needing one another at night. Interesting way to use recognizable details of one's day & night as markers to conjure up that old melody of longing again . . .

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

2 Months Ago

Thank you my friend! It felt like that writing it. Pulled in different directions. It was a pleas.. read more
Wow, I must apologize, as I did not see this any sooner, but am lost in words, the meaning is very deep, and intriguing, as well as very catching. I loved how you weaved in and out, taking the reader through a ride, of mixed emotions, hence your title Mixed Tape. As always a great piece, and I have no doubt, that you will continue providing us with excellent writing, in the near future.
Well written, and well done. I am amazed and so in love with this piece. Keep it up. :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

2 Months Ago

Thank you Maria! I'm still not writing much so I really appreciate your time. Very happy that you .. read more
Maria

2 Months Ago

Sure thing, and its ok, take your time. Enjoy your down time, and once you are in that place, that o.. read more
You amaze me with the growth... Every time... I stand by the fact... You can single-handedly say more in 3-4 word lines... Than any writer I have had the pleasure of reading can say in 10 word lines... Take that as you will, but I think it is absolutely jaw-droppingly talented... Kudo's, friend

Posted 2 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

duff

2 Months Ago

What up my brother! I hope you are well and it's great to hear from you. Your review is too kind b.. read more
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This brought back memories of tape reels of the sixties and seventies. Of recording music from the radio and finding love in youth. Certainly one with many triggers in it duff. Might suggest the final line as 'Love has our scene that we must test'?

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

John Alexander McFadyen

2 Months Ago

Hi duff I am fine. Planning our next holiday to Mull then on to Mauritius.I had meant to say 'Love .. read more
duff

2 Months Ago

I'm excited for your upcoming journey! I'm sure you will have lots to share. I just moved to the m.. read more
John Alexander McFadyen

2 Months Ago

The mountains sound great. Glad you are happy there and hope it keeps on giving you thrills.

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Added on August 3, 2017
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