Awaiting Devotion

My feelings of love

At last I see beauty
once again we meet
so mysterious you are
if you leave I'll weep

My heart is full joy
Oh so divine and sweet
yes because of you
my first love was unique

Thinking always of you
may you grant my wish
find me true love
with a heart of bliss

What does it take
to make you happy
life's too short, so make it snappy
I'm willing to give you my all
yet you treat me unfair

Yes...

I've seen you before

what do you want more

that's all I have to say.

Reviews

[Shamrock]

Your writing is beautiful. If you were talking as to a beloved I would say slow down and breath. If that person is not the right one, then give it time and the right one will come along

[aedaba]

Wow this is sooo good and reaally sweet. I like this a lot.

[zombiikillah666]

awwwwh...*wraps you up in a blue bow* this is so sweet and pretty.....*gives you cupcake with sprinkles.*

[Meredith Price]

beautiful.