My Big Brother, My Best Friend

I wrote this for school, we had to do a poem for some one we care about. I chose my older brother Nicholas. He is my best friend he is 17 years old and is graduating High school next year. Enjoy :)

You’re my big brother

You’re my best friend

You make me laugh when I want to cry

And I love you

 

But lately you’ve changed

You’ve started acting different

You barely talk to us anymore

And I miss you

 

Your friends are driving

And you are as well

You are no longer the happy little boy I remember

And I miss you

 

You used to love football

But now your gear is lonely and has no one to protect

You’re so different now

And I miss you

 

Do you remember when you told your friends you had to do homework

But stayed in and played Barbies with me

I know I do

And I miss you

 

You’re growing up no matter what

You want to go in the marines

Please don’t because I’ll be scared

And I’ll miss you

 

What ever you do

In your long lovely life

You’re my big brother

And I love you

 

 

 

Reviews

Awwwh Claudia this is beautiful :) I really love the repetive last lines. And I never knew that Nick wanted to go into the Marines! Anyway, love it, good job!