Counting the Starbursts

Counting the Starbursts

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One, two, three. It's great to be alive, living in harmony.

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I watch before me
A dazzling light-show
Sparks flying high and low
Magically delightful
I reach my hand to the night
Hoping to feel a spark
Ignoring my own conscious
As it whispers not to be foolish in the dark
I open my mouth
My tongue tasting the powder
The lovely melody so loud
But I just lay here...
Growing more fascinated by the hour.
My heart pounding in my chest
Imagining myself flying freely 
Pushing aside all of life's stress.
I almost cannot stop myself
From having an overreaction
The fantastic light are calling to me now
I want to join them with burning passion
The world around me
Realizing that I'm running out of time
I start counting my starbursts
The booming ringing like a chime
And I'm about to satisfy its thirst.
Life, itself, is gone
So it seems 
Not a soul to reach
I'm not safe until dawn
For the power of their instruments
Controlling me with its charm
Barely anything left of my resistance
As I'm left alone to be fed by its swarm. 

© 2012


Author's Note

Hey, guys! I just wrote this one this morning! I hope you enjoy it!

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I like the story in this poem. Filled with hope and life. It was fun to read. We must celebrate the big and small things in a life. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your writing is very poetic! Do you want to write for a career? I think you'd be a great professional poet one day! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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awesome :)
all your writings are so lively ...
i really liked the lines
"The fantastic light are calling to me now
I want to join them with burning passion"

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really really like this poem Nice Write xD

~Paige.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really love this! You're such a great poet when it comes to love and inspiration!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really love this one! It's so unique... The way you word it is amazing, and you give a perfect mental image before giving too much detail.
You have a great way with words...

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so pretty and very insipiring! Good write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, what a great way to start your day. This poem has been great. The wordings and rhyming fitted perfectly and it creates an imagery as vivid as a picture that made it more fun to read. You did a real nice job and am glad for you. Really, imagination is a spark that you have to fuel to create such lovely words to turn into an art. Great job here.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on February 14, 2012
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