Patience

Time is love, ticking until eternity...

Passion

It's what I'm breathing

Passion

The rush so sweet

And I...

Can barely smile

Knowing you're away

No longer

By my side.

Love is

A word of doubt

Today's

Society is a drought

But I...

Promise you

I will keep you

Hydrated

Erase all indication

My heart keeps beating

Thoughts always repeating

And I know there's a reason

For your hesitation

But listen...

To those who care

For I love you

Darling

No need to fear

I know you're scared

Because...

My heart

Throbs for you

Yes I am

Speaking the truth

So hold my hand

With no regret

Fixing your broken heart

Without breaking it instead.

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

What I like about this poem is the way the layout implies a conversation, a clever well written poem based on a good idea, this is the way people speak and think, you have captured this exactly, good work.