Love me tirelessly

My love for you is never at rest,

every day it transcends itself,

hoping only to improve perfection.

Enveloping every thought, smile and breath

my heart is unchangeably yours.

Without hesitation, I relinquish myself to you.

Wary of being mistreated, I kept my distance.

Love, you are honest and careful and true.

Your tender touch knows no  harm, my Comforter.

Your hair, your scent, your skin, your eyes

feed me strength and hope.

I am enchanted by your sweetness and charm.

When you speak my name my heart swells,

as if only your lips were meant to address me.

Your love is all-encompassing and has no rivals.

Nouns, letters, verbs, they are futile.

My eyes convey unfeigned feelings for you. Love.

They say "Keep me, I am yours. Love me tirelessly."

Author's Note

This is my first try at writing something like this, tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Emotive and romantic.
Well penned.

[missmonroe]

It's lovely

[deepblue04]

Aw, this is amazing. I really like this poem and hope that you have more!!!

[Jon]

Very intense-good use if metaphors. I especially liked the line, "When you speak my name my heart swells". It expresses a feeling we've all experienced but were not sure how to describe. Nice job!

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amazing words ~ enjoyed

[Legolas]

This is an amzing poem. Keep it up!!