Cobra

Cobra

A Poem by Manda A.
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Written sometime around March/April 2003. A sample from the book I am currently constructing

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From a distance

Midnight eyes narrow

Heart sinks

Muscles freeze

As they slice right through me

And I am gone.

 

The net has fallen from my grasp

Now I’ve been poisoned by you

You say, “I don’t bite!”

But you sure as hell do

You smile

It’s comedy

Satisfied

As I dissappear

 


© 2009 Manda A.



Author's Note

Manda A.
May need a little more work... have yet to revise this one.

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I like this has it is. This is so well written.

"The net has fallen from my grasp

Now I've been poisoned by you"

Those were my favorite lines, I connect with those the most. Great write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am sorry to announce that your poem (Cobra) did not make the finalist for the Broken Hearts contest.
LeeAnn



Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love it..leave it..it's so great...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow i like the imagery in this piece it made it easy to follow along and it made me wanna read on til' the end..you kept me intrigued and that is always a plus..
"From a distance
Midnight eyes narrow
Heart sinks
Muscles freeze
As they slice right through me"

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Manda A.
Manda A.

Chicago, IL



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