in the morning

in the morning

A Poem by m.s.early

I am in the morning again,
your hair pushed against.
It's scent relentless. Still with me.

Sleeping then seeing you,
having you, braced and forward.
Your hair hanging heavily on each breath of mine.

Your intoxicating air is sexy intriguing.
I am wanting and captivated.
Here. Once again.
In the morning.

© 2016 m.s.early



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...love, love, love your closing stanza! So briefly, beautifully expressed.

Posted 9 Months Ago


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This is stunning, sensual and so elegant. Starz

Posted 10 Months Ago


Well done, M..S. A true song of love. There are a couple of issues with punctuation, but nothing huge. As I said, there is love here. Good write.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Stanza two is effortlessly erotic, very tastefully done.

Posted 11 Months Ago


My coffee overflows this morning and I think I need a cigarette (I haven't smoked in over ten years) 49 views and I am the only comment?I know it's about personal preference... but I've always had great taste:) your work should be out there X....it is worthy!!!!!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Using that magic again I see......

Posted 11 Months Ago



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