she speaks carefully

she speaks carefully

A Poem by m.s.early

she speaks carefully

mostly with her armor

when shields up focusing

intently


but then stargazing

reckless love language

and she is vulnerable

until sobering from punch drunk love


i will hold her heart when it is open

consider her charm when she is fragile

netting the voice

when her emotions know no bounds

when her liquid words have not constraint

her lips wet with my name

touching mine


and i will barely tolerably sober with her

her eyes straightening

her voice strengthening

relax will i this scene

until her curtains close

the stage quieting

her motions beckoning me


her pattern learned

and the grace of her attention repaid

my lips wet against her breath

and the joy of our union explodes again

until tomorrow


© 2016 m.s.early



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40 views and this is only the first from me, I guess I'm not your only fan!I've thought from the very first moment that there was a way about your words...a way about your writing that does more than slide over you, does more than just seduce you with gentle kisses....it bores a hole, dives in deep and consumes you.. This is stunning as always X. I'll be back time and time again.

Posted 11 Months Ago


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It's just me, Margaret....making sure this Mic is on....

Posted 5 Months Ago


Yep just me again....I wish relationships stayed new and beautiful forever...

Posted 9 Months Ago


very well done, I love the super romantic ones, classy but still suggestive, very nice

Posted 10 Months Ago


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Really beautiful crafting here, effortlessly flowing with grace. There is a nuturung truth behind your words that settles into one with comfort and ease. Starz

Posted 10 Months Ago


Of course I'm back, because once is never enough to seep in the richness of your prose!& unlike others I can't just pop in and let you think it isn't good enough to comment on....although others may be speechless or intimidated by your ability...but you never cease to woo me with that soft, sultry, flow and that's something to ramble about!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

40 views and this is only the first from me, I guess I'm not your only fan!I've thought from the very first moment that there was a way about your words...a way about your writing that does more than slide over you, does more than just seduce you with gentle kisses....it bores a hole, dives in deep and consumes you.. This is stunning as always X. I'll be back time and time again.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing poetry my friend for love.
"her pattern learned
and the grace of her attention repaid
my lips wet against her breath
and the joy of our union explodes again
until tomorrow"
The above lines. True life and precious place. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago



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Added on November 17, 2016
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