Those Moments

Those Moments

A Poem by Pushkar Prabhat

===Those Moments===

copyright@pushkar prabhat, 2014


Daylight filtering through the curtains;

And a few beams poking through its holes;

Competing with your sunshine smile.

 

Those moments;

Lying next to you,

Your head on my arm,

The fingers entwined;

Looking into your eyes

Deciphering the meanings and purpose of life;

When the wind came through the window,

Letting in more sunlight,

Making you squint,

Blowing your hair on your cheek,

I tucked your hair behind your ear.

You smiled and your eyes showered benevolence;

Those moments,

Looking into your eyes,

I lived.


© 2014 Pushkar Prabhat


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You are a very romantic poet my friend, could only sigh and stay compelled. Stunning!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

thanks a lot.........so very glad you liked it so much!!! :) :)
I have experienced. And I have lost it. I know how valuable these moments are, and you presented them veautifully in this poem. Heart touching.

Posted 9 Years Ago


A smoothly flowing melodic write, my friend! Amazing love!
Loved it! Shows the passion, adoration and paints a cute picture.. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

wow! thanks a lot dear poetess.........:) :)
Sindu

9 Years Ago

Anytime Mr. Nese :D
Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

aye, aye.
ms. gifted!!
:)
such love! such passion! loved this to core :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

thanks a lot!!! :) :)
It's so hard for some people to understand that poetry is a series of pictures rather than full sentences. You paint with broad strokes and the imagery is both unadorned and deep. This is a nice piece and I have no suggestions on how to make it better (which is a first for me). Excellent work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

thank you so much for your time and this kind review.
I hope it's not because of what happene.. read more
icomeanon_13

9 Years Ago

Hahaha. No, I'm not. I'm a huge fan of educated, critical reviews. I really had nothing to add to th.. read more
Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

well, that indeed is an honor!! I really appreciate that!! thanks a lot........... :) :)
The most emotive piece that made me to go through deeply enjoying each word equal to Donne' beauty of feelings ...
Thanks for sharing so lovely the feelings!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

wow i am honored! thank you so much for this generous review!!! :) :)
M.A.Rathore

9 Years Ago

Welcome always my dear
Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

................... :)
"Looking into your eyes"
"Deciphering the meanings and purpose of life;"

This line has a deep meaning. A wonderful romantic work of art.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Romantic and sweet. The paintings too complimented the theme. Excellent...:)...............

Posted 9 Years Ago


Excellent writing, great footage on reality with passion and love, loved it


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

thank you so much....:)
Linda alexander

9 Years Ago

You welcome, take care friend
A truly beautiful piece of writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

thank you so much for this visit and a kind review. :)

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Added on July 21, 2014
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Tags: lying, couple, sunlight, love, life

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Pushkar Prabhat
Pushkar Prabhat

Bhagalpur, India



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