Going Away

sometimes it's better to leave.

Going Away

 

I sing to the night

Stars my listeners

The moon my spotlight

And I wait for the applause.

 

 

But I turn away to face

The vast, silvery garden laid before

My mind travels in sync with my gaze

I wonder if I’ll come back.

 

Lovely dark inky sky

Gentle breeze caressing my cheek

A question- why am I doing this? Why?

But I know I’ll go anyways.

 

So I pick up my bags and try to leave

Tears slip effortlessly

I bundle my thoughts; impossible to believe

And unlock the door to my forbidden freedom.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[deeps]

I really enjoyed this write, I found some truth within in.
Such a wonderful write.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

enjoyed this :) "The vast, silvery garden laid before
My mind travels in sync with my gaze" i liked a lot

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A poem I enjoyed greatly, emotions are masterfully expressed:)

[Raindrop]

Just walking away, sometimes, helps more than million actions you do and the words you say trying to fix or keep something dear to you.
It is a lovely write. I really enjoyed reading it.

[francinebc]

awesome.
if it's rhyming ur going for.
face and Gaze dont rhyme.

but it's ery lovely. i really enjoyed it.