Let It Rain

Let It Rain

A Poem by theopenbook
"

during the monsoon when love was in the rain;)

"

Let it rainJ

 

In the midst of a summer afternoon

When it suddenly starts to rain

Why does my heart beat like?

Like it will never beat againJ

 

When the first drops fall on my face

I think of you embracing them in your arms

And I wish that it was I instead

Held by you and feeling warmJ

 

And I wonder if you are thinking about me

As this rain floods my heart

If you are too dancing in this shower

If you too wish that we were never apartJ

 

And when I am drowned in the downpour

I long to be held by you

To be hugged just so tight and slowly whisper

‘I love you oh! I really do’J

 

And when it finally ends

I come out of my dream

Which still refuses to leave my eyes

And is tingling on the seams:P

 

Lovely love and the lovely rain

Beautiful is my love within

Precious heart and my precious soul

Come back and make feel wholeJ

 

And let me tell you what I want to "

 

“When it rains I think about you

When it does not you are still on my mind

A single look from you makes me crazy

Or is it- in love I am blindJ

 

 

 

 


© 2011 theopenbook



Author's Note

theopenbook
rain is the only best thing that happens in Delhi:) and somehow it always brings out the romantic in me:) please read and review:)

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the font makes it harder to read.

well written, lovely, i love the rain too. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very touching, its a lovely poem. Its well written. Keep up writing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very, very sweet! I loved this one too! Thank you :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


:) Although it's quite a plan ruiner, I love the rain. :) Nice write. Very soft and sweet.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Well captured. I love it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


a really sweet poem :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very sweet and romantic. Really rain and love are related in some ways. Love it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


this is so sweet, really romantic.. captured well in the picture u created, i enjoyed it :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow. I've always believed a poem should be a snapshot of an emotion in words. If so, this should be on the cover of Time magazine. Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


AW, i thibnk it's sweet and it reminds me of how some couples kiss in the rain and how romantic it looks! Great write! ^^

Posted 6 Years Ago


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