compromise my demise

late at night when im alone
i contemplate calling ur phone
im all alone in my dark room
the shadows thrive in my gloom
every now and then i shed a tear
but always, love, i show no fear

bring on my demise
come on now lets comprimise
rip out my heart and let it bleed
its ur own fault its how u chose to be
and the pain is more than i can bare
remember, love, theres nothing left for u to scare

Reviews

[D.L. Holmes]

cute, sweet...like lyrics to a song really. I enjoyed reading it because I felt I could actually hear the speaker's voice, and for the imagery it created of romantic dark, moonlit glooms, and bedroom curtains windows a flutter with nightly chills.

Nice write.

[Wildecat]

Lot of pain in this poem, hope things get better for you.