Revenge, A Dish Best Served Roasted

For Momzilla's contest, "Boiled In Bat Guano"

Dear Whomever you are;

I refuse

To let you

Ruin my life

With your abusive

Terror tactics.

Having lost

Too much

Of my life

To people

Like you.

Starting

With my mom

Who refused to enter

My new apartment

After I left

The homeless shelter.

As if

She was going

To boil her gonads

In bat guano.

By sharp contrast

You're nothing

But a two bit thug

Who's seeking attention

In the wrong places.

Like the other Trolls

Who I would love

To stuff you.

Inside a cave

With guano

Before setting it

Ablaze.

Leaving

With a smile

Upon my face.

Knowing

Your reign of terror

Is over.

Reviews

[blue angel]

1..... love the dish twist. Your poem digs deep into the emotional effects of being violated. I like this poem a lot. Thanks for sharing it. Respectfully, blue angel

[therisa]

Thank you, Blue Angel, for your very kind comments, on this poem.

[Bright Ocean Star]

This poem sounded cathartic. I hope it exercised some demons in your life. Nice writing!

[therisa]

Thank you, Bright Ocean Star. In a way, this poem is cathartic, in venting some of my anger, in a safe and constructive way.

[Bright Ocean Star]

I highly approve. I've done the very same myself a time or two. Be well.

[therisa]

Thank you, Bright Ocean Star. And you, too.

[MomzillaNC]

Angry words… not that he doesn't deserve it!

[therisa]

I know, Momzilla, too many people have been hurt or worse, by this Troll.

[MomzillaNC]

True. BTW: I don't think this needs a mature rating.

[therisa]

I put it on, for the video.

[MomzillaNC]

Well, I recommend pulling the video, then. I've rated the contest for everyone.

[MomzillaNC]

Did you submit it to the contest?

[therisa]

Just did, do you know, how many titles, I had to go through before, I found this one? Too many. Sigh. Took about 3 minutes.

[MomzillaNC]

That's why I messaged you the link.

Thanks.

[therisa]

Your welcome, Momzilla.

[MomzillaNC]

Gee, I wish more people would read your entry in the contest. I hope, by commenting again on various entries (including yours), it will drive more interest to the submissions.

[MomzillaNC]

Contest URL http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Boiled-In-Bat-Guano/50802/

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