Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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Never Say

Never Say

A Poem by The Spaniard
"

it's a big mistake

"

The silence...

Ohhh the silence.

My ill concieved words hang in the air

Like a feather caught in the wind.

And I can only sigh at the though of my own foolish notion..

To turn back time...

To quiet my speach...

To never speak the lines again.

Fear and anxiety grip me

Like the cold hand of death.

While the seconds pass like hours.

And finally the response is answered.

Carried into  my brain

By unseen sound waves,

And it's not how I planned.

But it is what I feared.

I sigh deep once more, wishing it was my last breath.

Take in the words that countered my own,

Roll over,

and fall into a slow,

terrible sleep.

© 2009 The Spaniard


Author's Note

The Spaniard
The beginning of the end

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Love is sweet-bitter. I know it is bitter-sweet, but I think it starts sweet then ends bitter so I reversed them. But it is never the end.

Ok from a writers point of view, great piece. The emotions are powerful. Feeling of sorrow, loss, helplessness, frustration pour out over me as I read this. "and its not how I planned. But it is what I feared." So real.

As your friend. Im sorry and Im hear for you any time. xoxo

Posted 15 Years Ago


Love is sweet-bitter. I know it is bitter-sweet, but I think it starts sweet then ends bitter so I reversed them. But it is never the end.

Ok from a writers point of view, great piece. The emotions are powerful. Feeling of sorrow, loss, helplessness, frustration pour out over me as I read this. "and its not how I planned. But it is what I feared." So real.

As your friend. Im sorry and Im hear for you any time. xoxo

Posted 15 Years Ago



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The Spaniard
The Spaniard

Westfield, MA



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I am a singer/songwiter and self proclaimed poet. I sing for a band in the western mass. area called Independent Idiot (if you wanna ask what that means contact me and I'll tell you). I have been .. more..

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