A Broken Promise

A Broken Promise

A Poem by J. Storm

Almost nothing is harder then seeing someone you care about so much find happiness in someone else's arms

Two joined as one in a night of passion and lust.
While two danced the timeless dance of love another shattered.
Two became one and one became many, one imploded into tatters and pieces.
A broken heart shattered even more.
A torn soul shredded with a life ending screech.
It courrupted me, it twisted me, it angered me, it made me hate you. 
The rage it creates is almost uncontrollable.
I want to hurt you, I want to watch you shatter at my fingertips, I want you to feel a piece of the anger I feel.
Through all of this I realized...I want you even more.

© 2018 J. Storm

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This was just amazing and I loved it the whole way through.

Posted 3 Months Ago

tugger of a write, and relatable for me

Posted 3 Months Ago

a love hate relationship,i guess we all visit here from time to time

Posted 3 Months Ago

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Added on December 30, 2017
Last Updated on January 4, 2018
Tags: cheating, affairs, lovelost, love, forget, never, lostinstorms


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