A Broken Promise

A Broken Promise

A Poem by J. Storm

Almost nothing is harder then seeing someone you care about so much find happiness in someone else's arms

Two joined as one in a night of passion and lust.
While two danced the timeless dance of love another shattered.
Two became one and one became many, one imploded into tatters and pieces.
A broken heart shattered even more.
A torn soul shredded with a life ending screech.
It courrupted me, it twisted me, it angered me, it made me hate you. 
The rage it creates is almost uncontrollable.
I want to hurt you, I want to watch you shatter at my fingertips, I want you to feel a piece of the anger I feel.
Through all of this I realized...I want you even more.

© 2018 J. Storm

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Somewhere I had heard..Promises are born to be broken...
Here such sudden narcissistic being is amazingly expressing how dependent on love the character was at first and now the attitude is like....Will make you see!!
Great read!

Posted 6 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was just amazing and I loved it the whole way through.

Posted 1 Year Ago

tugger of a write, and relatable for me

Posted 1 Year Ago

a love hate relationship,i guess we all visit here from time to time

Posted 1 Year Ago

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Added on December 30, 2017
Last Updated on January 4, 2018
Tags: cheating, affairs, lovelost, love, forget, never, lostinstorms


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