Inside Storm Ep 1

Inside Storm Ep 1

A Poem by J. Storm
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A look inside my twisted mind a little bit

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Anger, regret and rage.
It lives deep within me, Born and unborn it's free.
Like a written book with no page, I want you to lead me away.
I don't want to live in this dream anymore,
My heart can not be swayed.
Although I feel a fire burning, my heart swells and aches for you.
Anger keeps me back,
Rage is still there churning.
Twisting my emotions about you,
Will the icy touch of numbness ever take me back?

© 2018 J. Storm



Author's Note

J. Storm
I am no professional write I just like to vent a little bit about things I feel inside me

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I enjoyed reading your stuff! I feel like I can relate to this feeling.

Posted 6 Months Ago


A silly mistake - "Anger keep me back" - Line 7, or else i would have given it 100/100!! People like you are the real souls within the profession of writing! Keep up the good work man!!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J. Storm

6 Months Ago

Sorry it was suppose to say the anger keeps me back...Ill edit. Thank you for catching that
RyuJin Shiranami

6 Months Ago

It's okay dude... read my writings too and suggest me improvements man!!

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Added on December 30, 2017
Last Updated on January 4, 2018
Tags: twisted, mind, rage, anger, lost, idontknow

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J. Storm
J. Storm

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