On your Last breath

On your last breath, you said I shouldn’t cry,

On your last breath, you said I should always try.

Try to fight and just hold on tight,

Try to laugh and just act tough.

Show everyone that I am happy,

Show everyone that nothing can stop me.

Even though you’re not here with me,

I knew that our love was meant to be.

Though I know that you will never see me,

I can still feel your love

Flowing over me. ♥

Author's Note

Hi.

Reviews

[Jemma]

Beautiful write.

Try to show courage when things go wrong.
But don't keep all the hurt inside.

Very well written. The words diddn't always flow.
But it had a clear message.

Great write

[Cassandra D.]

This was really cool. :]
♥ loved it.
Even though you kinda mispelled breath like once, but don't worry...Everyone makes that mistake all the time... (i always do) lol.

[LeeAnne]

Awesome! I have totally felt the same way. Very nice and beautiful piece. (: