solace

Solace

is sought

in the sea.

A blue abyss

so calm and sweet

a place where you can feel complete.

As you progress

you start to drown

the frown turns upside down.

You are strong

you are built this way

someday you'll resurface but today is not the day.

Reviews

[angeleapaugh]

I really enjoyed this writing. Thank you for sharing it.

[Asante]

This is an interesting piece that I enjoyed reading. I got the moving image of someone pulling the waves of the sea over themselves, kind of how we would pull the covers over us as kids playing hide and seek.

We age, and the games remain the same -- only we hide, and we seek simultaneously. Fine write, Ioana. :)

[IamRealTusoul]

This is a beautiful writing, I enjoy it...thanks for sharing.

[alifeacoustic]

Beautifully interwoven narrative, almost beginning again at the end, like a continual loop. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading.