It Watches

A spur of the moment poem.

It watches you

When you sleep

When you eat

When you are alone

And when you are not

 

It watches you

Learning your habits

Your behaviors

During every task

At every moment

 

It watches you

Waiting patiently

Silently

For the perfect time

To strike

Reviews

[Elaine]

Short, simple, and well paced. Your use of repetition is also effective.

[ATG]

Why thank you. Its not my best, but it seems this poem is well recieved.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Is it watching so it can take over my life? It would be very, very sorry.

[Rasputin]

I like it... it's like writing off a seemingly paranoid person as crazy, only to find out that they were telling the truth the whole time.