Tears?

I cried
Under the stare
Of none who seemed to care
But one who stole my gaze and heart.
I loved.
I lived
With a good man
Who made my life complete
Until his final kiss goodbye.
He died.
I cried
Tears of all kinds,
Missing him but knowing
We'd be together again soon.
I died.

Reviews

[Shane Blackheart]

You're an amazing writer when it comes to emotions, and this one was quite sad. I'm not sure I want to say I enjoyed it, because it was so sad, but I did think it was a good poem nonetheless.

[Sarah Marie]

hehe thank you! I really appreciate your comments and reviews!!

[Shreyas Tripathy]

I like the way you capture deep moments at the blink of an eye .
Though I failed t6 understand the question mark in the title.
All in all, a rare piece of a work

[C.C. Marx]

wow, that is simple but powerful. A lot said in a short poem!

[Sarah Marie]

Thank you! I appreciate your comment! Glad you like it!

[Felecia]

Holy crap I not even kidding I just about cried...and it takes a lot for me to cry. This poem is short and simple, but great! Tells the true story of sorrow. Very well done

[Sarah Marie]

Thanks! I am really glad you like! I appreciate your review! Sorry I nearly made you cry.. :( Read one of my happier ones and maybe you will smile! :) lol jk....

[Felecia]

Ahaha, don't worry about me :)