He came

He came

A Poem by Dove

One night

One cold rainy night

He came

He came into my room

While I was sleeping

He came into my room while I was dreaming

Dreaming about running through grass fields

Smiling and laughing

He came while I was lying in the field

I could smell the sweet flowers

All I heard was a “shhhh”

He told me not to make a sound

What are you doing daddy I asked

Again he said “Shhhh”

Just relax baby, you’ll like it

I had didn’t know what he was talking about

Then he made me undress’

Then he did it

I was confused

When he was done he just left me lying there

He left me there all by myself

While I cried myself back to sleep

He took my innocence

The next night

I was scared to go to sleep

 

Because I knew he would come again

And I was right

He came over and over and over again

And I was alone

Each and every time


© 2011 Dove



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Powerful and amzing but extremly sad

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is such a sad and powerful poem. I hope this hasnt happend to you. But this is agreat write

Posted 6 Years Ago


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This was incredibly powerful. It was so hard to finish reading it. I love how you captured the emotions of a child so simply but powerfully. It brought tears to my eyes. Amazing work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I struggled to get to the end of this...(which is entirely to your credit).
Powerful stuff.

Posted 6 Years Ago


it is a poem giving out d emotions f a kid..almost got tears..i kno it happens to many...:(((

Posted 6 Years Ago


it is so sad..
made me cry almost..
i hope this hasnt happen to you..
this is one of the worst things that can happen to a kid...
those dads should be ... be... put down..
wow, that was cruel of me to say
i should shut up now

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so cruel, from how strong each line is, the pain is visible. And so many children go through it, and you can display this very well. This is sad to read to.
Thank you for sharing it with us

Posted 6 Years Ago


Dear God... I knew it. I knew as soon as I read the first line that it was gonna be like that. I'm going to pray to God that that isn't your personal situation... That was just heart wrenchingly sad and.... jeez, it makes me wanna cry

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Everyone thank you so much for the reviews. I really appreciate them.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh my gosh.
So many emotions right now.This is heartbreaking. Intense. The innocence of the phrasing made it even more heartbreaking. Well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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