Voices

something i wrote while sitting in my garage.

I think something is wrong with me

Something about me just isn’t right

I’m different from everyone else

And I don’t think it’s a good thing

I hear voices in my head

They tell me what to do

They tell me right from wrong

But what they say isn’t always true

Everything I do

I do because of them

I have the brain

But the voices have the mind

They control me every second

I think every day I’m getting crazier

The voices I hear

They don’t make me strong

They make me weak

I can’t decide for myself

I don’t really know right from wrong

All I know is what they say

And I just have to pray they know best

Author's Note

This is just a random piece and i do not hear hear voices.

Reviews

[EMMIE]

HA HA HA SO YOU DON'T HEAR VOICES. BUT WAY TO EXPRESS THAT FEELING WITHOUT ACTUALLY FEELING IT. GREAT WRITE. MY FAVE LINES ARE
"I have the brain
But the voices have the mind"
HOW CREATIVE IS THAT!!! I LOVED IT.

[Cosmic Dreamer]

its really good! As you don't actually hear voices, it is a great representation of the feelings that people have (someone I know has 'voices'). I love the part 'I have the brain, but the voices have the mind'. Well done, its a very good poem