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Untitled

A Poem by Dove
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Got the inspiration from a song.

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I’m going to keep spreading this message even if it kills me

To stop is something I’m refusing

Put your head up, open your eyes

Don’t be afraid to be you, wear no disguise

Keep climbing till you reach the top

Don’t worry about the haters cause for them it’s going to be a scary drop

This is for you and me

It’s ok to live out your dreams

Disagree? Ok feel free

Trust, I won’t for you to listen to me

I may be only sixteen but I’ve learned a lot in this life

One thing I know is life is full of strife

But you have to learn and push through it

This is your life; you’re the one who controls it

It doesn’t matter what you look like

Each and every person has a light

It doesn’t matter what you you’ve been through

It’s irrelevant what you see when you look outside your window

Picked fence or barb wire

Are your hands already raised? Oh well then raise them higher

I may be five six but I swear I feel like I’m six eight

Now let my words be like a switch blade to a haters ribcage

 

 


© 2011 Dove



Author's Note

Dove
This poem is not done. I have to make like a little chorus and then write down the other half..... well tell me what you think so far.



Reviews

Impressive! Incredibly insightful for your age at the time. Extraordinary talent. Nice work!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


"It’s ok to live out your dreams"

I love this one. Do you rap, or only write? (if "only" and "write" can ever be in the same sentence!)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Well done!!! Yes its really true that despite of all haters you should do what you want ...
Very nice message...I really enjoyed reading this poem... Keep on writing and thanks for sharing....
Take care
Riddhi

Posted 1 Year Ago


My wish for you is that you will be surrounded by love and then more love. This is very well spoken, an important and inspiring message. You will make a better world for those you touch will know a noble spirit. Bravo!

Posted 2 Years Ago


I luv it. It is a message that this world should embrace. forget the ignorance of other people and let live you'll find the world easier to bear.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Well done Smarie. You are right on. You would have been happy in the commune I lived in back in the sixties. I am glad to hear you are pro positive. I wrote a story about someone named Abbadar. He is the one who brings everyone together in a positive way. The story is called " The Shipwreck of the Phaloes 7 " I have placed 8 of the chapters here. You can get a sense of him in the first chapter. You remind me of him. Perhaps he can guide you to bring your generation together for a positive greatness.

Posted 4 Years Ago


"Keep climbing till you reach the top", "Don’t worry about the haters cause for them it’s going to be a scary drop" I really like these lines. Perfectly stated. I fully believe with everything you have said in this poem. Down with the haters! haha. Great write...


Posted 6 Years Ago


:) Wonderful! lol I'm 5'5" :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


hey was nice:)) keep writin...:)))love ur wrk:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Back in the dark ages of heavy metal rock, the DOORS had a song out; I can't remember the name, but it had a line that went "Break on through to the other side." I see you here, breaking through the wall of negativity and crossing over into the land of the possitive. Good luck, and remember you'll only go as far in life as you allow yourself to go; keep thinking possitive, be strong, never quit. Gee, I sound almost like a coach.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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