Untitled

A Poem by Dove

Got the inspiration from a song.

Previous Version
This is a previous version of Untitled.

I’m going to keep spreading this message even if it kills me

To stop is something I’m refusing

Put your head up, open your eyes

Don’t be afraid to be you, wear no disguise

Keep climbing till you reach the top

Don’t worry about the haters cause for them it’s going to be a scary drop

This is for you and me

It’s ok to live out your dreams

Disagree? Ok feel free

Trust, I won’t for you to listen to me

I may be only sixteen but I’ve learned a lot in this life

One thing I know is life is full of strife

But you have to learn and push through it

This is your life; you’re the one who controls it

It doesn’t matter what you look like

Each and every person has a light

It doesn’t matter what you you’ve been through

It’s irrelevant what you see when you look outside your window

Picked fence or barb wire

Are your hands already raised? Oh well then raise them higher

I may be five six but I swear I feel like I’m six eight

Now let my words be like a switch blade to a haters ribcage

© 2011 Dove

Author's Note

This poem is not done. I have to make like a little chorus and then write down the other half..... well tell me what you think so far.

Reviews

Dezzyray

its very blunt like mee! :3 i like the message, it's powerful and somehow inspiring for me

Posted 12 Years Ago

paparapapa

Very straightforward. And I love the message of this poem. Very true. I also want a world free of haters. :) Great write. ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago

Thea

"Don’t be afraid to be you, wear no disguise
Keep climbing till you reach the top"
This sounds really better than the first version...We should not care about haters...Let's live our lives to the fullest!
I like this poem! Job well done! :)))

Posted 12 Years Ago

Robbie~xoxo~

WOW! Very uplifting!...This makes you strive to overcome the hate. You won't find a hater here! I love this..."You're a person and every person has a light." ~Well said!