Keep Going

Hey

I know it's hard

But I need you to remember

What doesn't kill you

Can only make you stronger

I know what you're going through

I know what you're feeling like

Wash away that negativity

Cause everything will be alright

Don't let it stop you

Don't let it hold you down

Keep going straight

Don't stop and turn around

Keep it going

You can win the race

It doesn't matter what they say

Just keep going

Laugh in their face

It's all about you

You're a champion

You're worth so much!

A million and then some

Don't give up

It's your time to shine

This is your light

Not theirs or mine

Keep it going

Yes!!

You won the race

Those that doubted you are silence

Check the expressions on their face

Yes you did it

You caused that

You proved them wrong

Be proud of that

Yes you reached the line

Against all odds

This is your light

This is your time

Reviews

[Raven Cedrone]

This piece is such an inspiration and encouragement to those out there that are going through struggles and difficulties in life. You have a wonderful way with words, bringing power behind each line. Well done.

~Raven

[She With Eyes Like Unsh..]

I really liked your poem. Your style is much like you are writing a song.

[Sam Ingram]

Truly inspiring...beautiful.

[Megan Rose]

I really love this :D

[Serenity Faith]

What an inspiring piece of work! I love it! It has such a strong meaningful message to many many people. Excellent write, and the rhythm was perfect ^_^ Don't you just love proving others wrong

[V.J.C.]

What i truly loves is stories/poems that i can connect with on some degree. This is one that is great and loved to read it. This poem is something i like a lot because i strive to prove to those that doubt that they are wrong and i can succeed at what i love to do.
THANKS FOR THE READ.

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Wonderful. I love this poem, really excellent job! :)

[Seshat Nidaba]

I think it's safe to say that you have taken tragic writing as far as it can go, to a limit of urgency and emotional range of gaining strenth from adversity. Though how I do long to see a lighter side in your writing? If you wrote something triffling and beautiful, I would be very encouraged and not worry about you.

[nowhere]

what if , what doesnt kill you , only makes you a little weaker all the time.

[BloodyMary]

This is such a powerful read... I love it.