Burn

Burn

A Poem by Richard Mueller
"

I'm a fire

"
Something is growing inside me 
Oh god 
I think it might be a fire 
No, not a flame of passion 
An actual slow-burning
Ember creating 
Night lighting 
Fire 
I feel it burning my whole state of being 
From the inside out 
There's no hope left for me 
There's no hope left for those around me 
Because all I can do is 
Burn 
Burn myself 
Burn people 
Burn places 
Burn everything 
I think the only way to extinguish me and my life 
Is an ice cold bucket of water 
I won't have to live with guilt 
I won't have to live with myself 
I won't have to hurt people, places, and things
I can just die out like most every other flame 

© 2017 Richard Mueller


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Richard Mueller
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Hello! wonderful work, quite relatable :) in line 20 it sounds like 'they' should be 'the'. Just a quick little thing I noticed!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Added on January 19, 2017
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Tags: Fire, Burn, Flame, Water, Guilt

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Richard Mueller
Richard Mueller

River Grove, IL



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Written in digital ink, I implore to you my thoughts for they are something you'd be intrigued by, I would think The Poet And The Singer, Both With Silver Tongues PS I'm 17, but to be able to read.. more..

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