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Trials without tribulation from a mislead error.

What wrong makes a right from justified terror?   

I bring undaunted loyalty with resented obedience.

I humble myself, not to satisfied the status quo

 But to lend credence to all I know.

 For the heart is thicker than a stone,

 Therefore it shall not weaken my soul.

 Many and many will cross this path.

 But few will leave with the last laugh.

 So I take this stand before I knell.

 As I raise my hands before I tread

 What wisdom shall prevail?

 

                       By Mauricio Montoya

 

 

Reviews

[joe shmo]

i like the words that was used, it flows together nicely :)

[Ashley.M.E]

this is a great poem, I like it alot and it's completely true.

[X]

very strong piece. remind me of a poem i read a long time ago but i can't quite remember the name. nonetheless, you've created a nice pice here that rolls around in ones head beautifully.

Abigail