You're Beautiful

You're Beautiful

A Poem by Mauricio Montoya
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A sight for my eyes

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You’re beautiful

 

I’ll never find a word to describe

Nor explain the emotion I felt

When I first saw you

And even now

My heart skips a beat

With the thought

Of you

Running through

All the time

In side of my mind

Only you

Everyday when I see you

I search for those words

That defines

These heartfelt feelings

I have for you

Still

I’m at a lost

On how to say

You’re beautiful.

 

By Mauricio Montoya

 


© 2011 Mauricio Montoya



Author's Note

Mauricio Montoya
Something I put together for a girl I just met.

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You just surprised me; I thought this poem was about your past love. I just now read it was for a girl you just met. Lucky girl! Nice to know you fell in love once again. Something I didn't think was possible in the midst of heartbreak.

Great poem and nice work!

Good luck with your new love . . .

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Just walk up to her and hand her a copy of this poem. Valentine

Posted 1 Year Ago


Mauricio Its me Chastity, I can not find you on facebook are you still here? I never got a chance to say goodbye. Youll always be a friend of mine and I am glad god had a place we can meet. I love you and thank you again for the poem. Good luck. Ill check this to see if you respond back, but let me know where you are. I

Posted 5 Years Ago


True love is indescribable, even, with all of the words that has been written about it. It's more than mere words can say. Great write!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nicely done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


You said it very well my friend in this poem!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Beautiful poetry put to words by a mans true love for a woman. Simply beautiful. Thanks for the poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You just surprised me; I thought this poem was about your past love. I just now read it was for a girl you just met. Lucky girl! Nice to know you fell in love once again. Something I didn't think was possible in the midst of heartbreak.

Great poem and nice work!

Good luck with your new love . . .

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Just say it baby... every woman loves to here those three words... and its better then the other three words... 'you are hot'... telling a woman she is beautiful is better than any other compliment you can give.
~♥~

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful view of your thoughts and
thoughts the beauty and love grip the heart
your words captured beautiful vividness and flow and
a loving tenderness in your words!
Excellent write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is a heartfelt piece that in my mind every woman would love to hear. Sometimes we are at a loss to describe our emotions and the beauty we see in others. the flow of this poem is done very nicely and all your thoughts are projected clearly. You poems are making leaps and bounds. each one I read gets better and better. Keep up the magical work.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Mauricio Montoya
Mauricio Montoya

Petaluma, CA



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Love to draw and cook from time to time, when I'm not drawing I’ll write poems. My favorite poet is Edgar Allen Poe. more..

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